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Worthing Text by ~ezs:iconezs:



The middle aged woman has artificially blonde hair,
Dark eyelashes. She looks awkward and lonely.
Her bright red scarf is obscured when she dabs her mouth.
Now she makes a noise as she cuts her food,
Perhaps asking someone to notice her.
The coffee tastes too much like coffee.

Someone moves the cutlery, it sounds like an orchestra
In its complexity. No one knows me here.
The fan heater buzzes and rattles in the corner.
Crazy machines horde round the table, on the roads.
They cannot spell. There is a plump boy who is self effacing,
Apologetic, almost sycophantic with his laughter.
As I get further from sleep, into exhaustion,
My back twinging, I see what there is.

I do not hallucinate: my vision strips down
To minute attitudes. I think of nothing
And everything lets itself be seen.
I stare into a space between a bright salad counter
And the dark through the door, blank,
Thinking about how the staff are watching me:
Sufficiently warm, tired me.

A man disturbs the sald bar tableau;
The fat boy is drunk, embellished by me,
Talking to his dad.  

Perhaps I'll walk forever.
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Yet another old poem I dug out, mainly as it seemed similar to a recent one by :iconrevolution-is-sexy: ([link]).

I like it because it still reminds me of the moment when I wrote it: spaced out, having been awake for around 36 hours, and having spent the night driving then sleeping in my car to wake up on a dock with the rising sun.

Though as a poem it's a bit flabby, I suppose. Much like the boy.
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I like it... i guess i havent ever really read poetry containing the middle aged fake blondes... good description on scenery too
There's far too little poetry about middle-aged fake blondes. It's a rich seam waiting to be mined.
I would even go so far as to say there should be more poetry about really old women with blue rinse hair. You know, like Estelle Getty and her brethren.
Odd imagery, that takes an unexpected turn. Well done. :+fav:

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There is no way to measure an artist, or their work, because nothing matters, but their vision. Their acceptance by the rest of the world is merely external.
I will be colloquial and trite and say that you kick a lot of ass. Keep posting your old stuff.

I had nothing better to do today, and I was delighted to find that you had posted four poems that I hadn't read yet.

best two lines:
"Perhaps asking someone to notice her.
The coffee tastes too much like coffee."

I like the combination of the philosophical and banal.

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I want to hook my panties up to a parachute and fly.
I like that colloquial/trite compliment. You are very encouraging. And as you know, I treasure your emoticons :)
You know I use them sparingly. I keep meaning to explore and find some good ones to use, but I always end up using one of four. the one that means love, the one that means adoration, the one that claps, and the one that dances.

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I want to hook my panties up to a parachute and fly.
Each one, I put it in a frame, and store it in a cardboard box in the back of my car.

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